下面是小编给大家整理的gre考试写作衔接词多多了解，本文共8篇，欢迎大家借鉴与参考，希望对大家有所帮助。
篇1：gre考试写作衔接词多多了解
for instance; for example; such as; consider the fact that;
立即：
immediately; for the time being; in no time; on the spot;
gre考试鉴于此：
for that matter; in that case; for that reason; as for;
可能不是这样：
(unfortunately)
=>this is not necessarily the case;
this is often/certainly not the case;
this might not be the case;
this need not be the case;
common sense and experience tell us this is not the case/this assumption is a poor one;
=>the argument fails to substantiate this assumption;
perhaps ~that have nothing to do with~;
this argument by anal.y is wholly unpersuasive;
this argument, nonetheless, is based on an oversimplified analysis of the cause of~ and the presumptuous correlation is unacceptable;
=>although this is entirely possible, the argument provides no evidence to support this assumption;
if this is not the case, then it is entirely possible that~;
lacking evidence to confirm this assumption, it is entirely possible that ~;
应该：
would have to; should; ought to; must; have to; be required to; would be;
gre写作考试根据总体的趋势：
overall group of~; in general; as a whole; on the whole;
断言：
assert; claim; postulate; declare; affirm; emphasize; advocate;
反映：
indicate; reveal; reflect; demonstrate; imply; illustrate; infer; predict;
可能性：
possibility; likelihood (in all likelihood); alternative/alternative means of ~; explanation; occurence; validity; legitimacy; credibility;
可行性：
feasibility;
GRE作文范文：Argument
Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument.
1.The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products.
“Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build our next new store in Painesville, which has many such residents. Painesville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club, which nearly closed five years ago due to lack of business, has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. We can even anticipate a new generation of customers: Painesville's schoolchildren are required to participate in a 'fitness for life' program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.”
2.The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deer haven Acres to all homeowners in Deer haven Acres.
“Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deer haven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and house painting.”
3.The following appeared in a newspaper article about law firms in the city of Megalopolis.
“In Megalopolis, the number of law school graduates who went to work for large, corporate firms declined by 15% over the last three years, whereas an increasing number of graduates took jobs at small, general practice firms. Even though large firms usually offer much higher salaries, law school graduates are choosing to work for the smaller firms most likely because they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. In a survey of first-year students at a leading law school, most agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less important to them than job satisfaction. This finding suggests that the large, corporate firms of Megalopolis will need to offer graduates more benefits and incentives and reduce the number of hours they must work.”
4.“Of the two leading real estate firms in our town---Adams Realty and Fitch Realty---Adams is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents. In contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch, and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago, I listed my home with Fitch and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams.”
从GRE Issue考试的官方陈述看issue写作素材的准备思路
“到底用中国素材还是美国素材好?”
“到底什么样的素材会吸引考官的眼球?”
“法律类的题目我实在没有例子怎么办?”
“像牛顿、爱因斯坦的例子到底能不能用?”
……
我个人认为，要回答上述问题，就要先仔细阅读一下ETS对GRE写作的官方陈述：
“The Analytical Writing Measure tests your critical thinking and analytical writing skills. It assesses your ability to articulate and support complex ideas, construct and evaluate arguments, and sustain a focused and coherent discussion. It does not assess specific content knowledge.
The tasks in the Analytical Writing measure relate to a broad range of subjects — from the fine arts and humanities to the social and physical sciences — but no task requires knowledge of specific content. In fact, each task has been tested by actual GRE? test takers to ensure that it possesses several important characteristics, including the following:
● GRE test takers, regardless of their field of study or special interests, understood the task and could easily respond to it.
● The task elicited the kinds of complex thinking and persuasive writing that university faculty consider important for success in graduate school.
● The responses were varied in content and in the way the writers developed their ideas.”
上述的官方陈述中，我们可以看出以下几点：
1)不考察专业背景。ETS明确指出：“It does not assess specific content knowledge.”“No task requires knowledge of specific content.”既然如此，素材是否足够专业，对考分是没有影响的。也就是说，专业性强的素材不一定能够为考试加分。而普通素材也不一定让考试减分。所以，我个人觉得，我们要彻底摒弃issue素材准备过程中对知识背景的过分依赖。
2)着重考察辩证性思维(critical thinking)和分析性的写作能力(analytical writing skills)。ETS明确指出，GRE写作考试，其实更关注于：你的写作是否体现了辩证性思维，你的写作是否论证性强、具有说服力。因此，我们其实不应该花很多时间在素材上，大量的精力应该放在论证是否说服力强这一点上。
以ETS所给出的官方范文为例，ETS在官方网站和官方指南上都给出了题库第一题的从1分到6分的官方范文。其中那篇6分的官方范文，我们通过剖析不难发现。全文所用的11个例证没有一个是学术性专业性很强的例子。相反，作者所举的例子都是很普通的、平时生活中非常常见的例子。以下段落摘自该文的第一段[注1]：
“The statement linking technology negatively with free thinking plays on recent human experience over the past century. Surely there has been no time in history where the lived lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals how technology has revolutionized the world. Most people commute to work in an automobile that runs on an internal combustion engine. During the workday, chances are high that the employee will interact with a computer that processes information on silicon bridges that are .09 microns wide. Upon leaving home, family members will be reached through wireless networks that utilize satellites orbiting the earth. Each of these common occurrences could have been inconceivable at the turn of the 19th century.”
这其实是一个很值得推敲的issue开头。整个段落中，作者所使用了三个例子(car, computer, mobile phone)，均属很平常很普通的素材。但是，语句的写作非常流畅，让读者阅读之后大脑中产生很强的画面感。由此可见，素材本身不分高低贵贱，用好生活中的很朴实的素材，也能够成就GRE写作高分。
此外，还需要关注的是，普通例子还有一个极其重要的好处，那就是说服力更强。还是拿这个段落举例，作者用“A quick reflection on a typical day reveals how technology has revolutionized the world.”这样一句话把这三个例子串了起来，体现出这些例子的典型性和普适性。一定程度上，这样平常、简单的例子来例证，非但没有让文章“逊色”，反而让这种论证变得具有极强的说服力。相反，如果你在此举的例子很特殊很专业，反而不具有说服力。为什么呢?我们学习argument考试的时候应该都学过一个逻辑错误叫“hasty generalization”(以小推大)。事实上，所有的举例论证，都会有这个问题。Argument中我们要指出这个逻辑漏洞，而在issue写作中，我们就要尽量避免这个逻辑漏洞。如何尽量弥补?就是依靠朴实无华的日常生活中的例子。而尽量避免学术性强，专业性强的例子。
为什么要提这一点呢?因为长期以来，GRE issue一直给学生甚至部分老师一种幻觉，那就是：既然是学术考试，就必须要把文章写得很学术。比如，凡是出现法律类的题目，就必须把法律的基本假定、法律的意义这些东西要阐述清楚。这种认识，在很长一段时间内，哪怕是在现在，依然普遍存在。不少GRE写作老师甚至某些GRE写作参考书，对学生的这种认识也起到了推波助澜的作用。普遍地，同学们会选择“难”、“深”的素材来作为写作素材，觉得在考试中所运用的素材越专业越艰深，就越能体现出自己深厚的学术功底。而实际情况并非如此。在我所接触的学生习作中，不乏有使用专业性很强、而写得并不理想的文章。以下为典型的一例：
(学生习作)11. People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
The statement indicates that people behave according to external forces instead of their own idea. However, as the great philosopher Karl Marx said, all the things are determined by inner world, since internal elements are decisive while external factors merely play a role of catalyst. Consider the process of decision making, which people's behaviour depends on. No matter how powerful external forces are, it is people themselves that decide whether they yield to the forces or insist on their own belief or follow their hearts when pressure from external forces and ideas in inner world are controversial. Accordingly, for this matter, I would like to stand the side Marx holds.
To start with, we should acknowledge that behaviour is depended on decision. As Cognitive Behaviour Theory proves, people's behaviour directly results from decision. Only after thinking and decision can people set out to do something. Based on this assumption, therefore, it is necessary for us to have a look on the process of decision making.
People's behaviour can be classified into two groups. One is instinctive behaviour which regareds people as a kind of animal, and the other is social behaviour. However, as people are a kind of social animal with brilliant mind, instinctive behaviour such as seeking for water, food and sacurity, in terms of people, is nevertheless controlled by brains. For instance, soldiers can suffer from thirsty and hunger during wars, students will stop eating when class starts for the sake of respecting teachers, although they may extremely hungry. Thus, despite instinctive behaviour may determined by forces on other kinds of animal, people behaves after their decisions.
Social behaviour, the other group, is more clear to see dependence on decision. Large number of theories study decision making and factors influencing decision. Communication and psychological theorists developed consistency theory, which offers us a powerful testimony on people's own decision when facing conflict choice. All consistency theories begin with the same premise: people are more comfortable with consistency than inconsistency. Therefore, people tend to initially seek mental balance facing conflicts. Even though external pressure does not obviously force one, who is the unique one holds different idea with others, to change idea, but for seeking mentally balance, the individual tends to follow the majority. In this way, decision changes, on one's own making.
Similarly, in terms of economics theory, game theory provides a method of studying decision making, which also strengths people's own tendency to maximum the benefit and minimum the loss .Take laws, a definitely type of forces out of people's mind, for example. Laws forbid people in a variety of aspects. No matter what individuals thinks, laws regulate people's behaviour. And during one's decision making on whether he is going to drive or not after drinking beer, for example, he is bound to weigh benefits and loss. Laws doubtless play a role of affecting his decision.
上文给读者的最大印象是“难懂”。而且作为写作老师，我完全想象得出来，作者写这篇文章的过程也同样是极其痛苦的。作者非常希望自己能够写出一篇很深刻的文章，可是对于一个对英语写作的驾驭能力不是特别高的同学来说，写这样的文章就会出现被“憋”住的情况。即：想表达但不会表达、或者想表达但不知如何表达的情况。本文中，这种例子不计其数。全文从第一段开始，就引用了社会行为学和社会心理学的理论来进行阐述，但是，所有读者在读文章的过程中，几乎要每读一句话就要停顿一下，想一想作者到底要表达什么。比如，第四段第一句话：Social behaviour, the other group, is more clear to see dependence on decision. 这种句子，就是典型的读者大致能够知道作者想表达什么，但就是不会表达的情况。更为典型的就是第四段的倒数第二句：Even though external pressure does not obviously force one, who is the unique one holds different idea with others, to change idea, but for seeking mentally balance, the individual tends to follow the majority. 此句话层次非常不清楚，让读者读后完全不知所云。事实上，这种写作常常会让文章陷入“死局”——作者很痛苦，同时读者也很痛苦。作者想表达但不会表达，读者想弄清楚作者的意思但反复读还是弄不清楚。出现这种情况的主要原因，其实就是文中所使用的写作素材理论性过强，导致过于抽象。我们知道，无论是哪门语言，表达抽象概念的难度要远远大于表达具体事例的难度。这几乎成为了所有人全都认同的常识。因此，如果没有能力来驾驭这样的文章，想办法把文章写得更加“简单”才是明智之举。而且，既然ETS已经明确指出，是否了解专业背景对于文章分数的高低没有任何影响，这就说明把文章写得艰深是完全没有必要的。既然如此，那就索性不要选择理论性专业性强的素材。
很多同学在骨子里害怕GRE issue考试，例子是其中的一个致命问题。而事实上，我们根本不用担心，因为所有的话题，我们其实都有办法用日常生活中的例子就完全能够应付。比如，涉及类似法律领域的题目，就没有生活的例子了吗?当然不是!交通法规、食品安全、网络安全、保护环境、盗版、甚至义务教育法，都是阿!哪一个不可以举例?!为什么一定要举辛普森案件、十四修正案呢?艺术没有生活的例子了吗?文学、影视中的好例子比比皆是，为何一定要举莫扎特、贝多芬呢?如果把这些例子准备好，那是非常棒的。既好写、又具有说服力，何乐而不为呢?
当然，必须要指出的，本文的观点是基于ETS官方陈述的解读和中国学生写作的实际情况入手进行分析的。并不代表所有同学都一定要沿着这条思路走。专业性强的例子不是不可以，而是具有劣势。但这并不表明每一个学生都写不好专业性强的例子。所以，同学们要根据自己的实际情况进行选择。如果某个领域的专业性素材你非常熟悉而且写起来得心应手，当然是可以的。
篇2：gre考试写作这些衔接词需记住
gre考试写作衔接词多多了解
gre写作衔接词举例：
for instance; for example; such as; consider the fact that;
立即：
immediately; for the time being; in no time; on the spot;
gre考试鉴于此：
for that matter; in that case; for that reason; as for;
可能不是这样：
(unfortunately)
=>this is not necessarily the case;
this is often/certainly not the case;
this might not be the case;
this need not be the case;
common sense and experience tell us this is not the case/this assumption is a poor one;
=>the argument fails to substantiate this assumption;
perhaps ~that have nothing to do with~;
this argument by anal.y is wholly unpersuasive;
this argument, nonetheless, is based on an oversimplified analysis of the cause of~ and the presumptuous correlation is unacceptable;
=>although this is entirely possible, the argument provides no evidence to support this assumption;
if this is not the case, then it is entirely possible that~;
lacking evidence to confirm this assumption, it is entirely possible that ~;
应该：
would have to; should; ought to; must; have to; be required to; would be;
gre写作考试根据总体的趋势：
overall group of~; in general; as a whole; on the whole;
断言：
assert; claim; postulate; declare; affirm; emphasize; advocate;
反映：
indicate; reveal; reflect; demonstrate; imply; illustrate; infer; predict;
可能性：
possibility; likelihood (in all likelihood); alternative/alternative means of ~; explanation; occurence; validity; legitimacy; credibility;
可行性：
feasibility;
高分GRE写作提纲举例指导
15“The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior.”
.会稳定性取决于许多方面
1、承认对 extreme human behavior 的反映可以体现社会稳定性镇压，说明存在很大问题，政府没有理由说服 counterproductive in the long run compromise; constructive communication 说明有稳定趋势，政府可以解决处理好
2、其实出现 extreme human behavior 就说明社会稳定性存在问题robbery; murder; suicide; rebellion
3、社会稳定性还要看经济发展、人民生活
.Immediate, existing problems好比急性疾病对于人体一样常常关系到社会的稳定，经济的运行，国家的存亡，解决不好后果十分严重。法国巴黎的**，西班牙车站恐怖主义爆炸，他们直接威胁社会的稳定，必须很好的解决
但是仅仅对极端事件做出反应是不能保证社会稳定的，因为社会不稳定的根本原因没有消除;比如，虽然解决了纽约公交系统罢工，使得城市交通恢复正常。但是工人的待遇没有得到改善，等到矛盾激化岛一定程度还会出现同样的罢工，相比之下预防与维护社会的长期稳定比解决已经出现的问题更有价值，代价更小。好比致病不如保健。比如通过长期政策的作用消除贫困与种族仇恨，从根本上消灭不稳定因素。还能提高人们生活水平，必须防病为主，致病为辅。对极端事件的反应只能作为最后的保障
15T“The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior.”
.会的安定取决于它对人们极端行为的响应和措施
① extreme as violence: incredib le tragedy of September 11th 政府的对KONGBU分子严查与对遇难者安抚工作
② extreme in science/academia: Einstein principle of relativity, 开明的环境。 否则知识分子会难得进步，甚至感到恐慌，the cultural revolution.
③ 重点应该在预防，而不是反映
④ 其他方面：如自然灾害，国际形势
Though it seems impossible that there will be a society as serene as paradise without any kind of horrible extremes of human behavior, it should never be an excuse for the failure of keeping the happening of extremes under effective control. But the stability of a society asks for much more than just agile responds and firm punishment to the extremes of human behavior. The stability of a society even requires its adequate conduction to some seemingly ordinary human behaviors in specific situations. A stable and healthy society is cherished by everyone.
高分GRE写作提纲举例指导
13“Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.”
.分同意
1、需要保护，语言是重要文化遗产，distinctive culture heritage individual identity; extinction of language results in diminished sense of prid e, dignity and self-worth continental Europe, many people cling tenaciously to their language French Cadanians insist on French as their official language, to preserve the distinct culture heritage
2 、随着全球化发展，英语成为主导，拉近各国、各族之间的距离，这样保护少数语言就有阻碍作用了 language homogenization shorten the distance between ,bring... Internet adopt english as the official language impede cross-cultural communicati on; misunderstanding; distrust; from the pragmatism point of view, language is ju st symbol of meaning an d ideas. Almost all the language have the same function
3、要保护 dying language 政府需要花费大量资源，对于贫困国家来说意义不大 according to the theory of “natural selection” in the realm of language similar to the domain of ecology, we can conclude that there is no need for government to sp end too much time and energy to save them for it is an useless effort against the language evolution itself. In the remote mountainous areas of China can we find the Kejia villages with Kejia villagers whose language Kejia dialect is. With the complicated structures and the confused pronunciations, the in trinsic function of Kejia dialect can not be fulfilled in modern society for it will take a lot of time for outsiders to understand, let along use it to communicate with Kejia people . With fewer and fewer people using it, this dialect is on the brink of extinction now. When it comes to whether govern ment should act to preserve it, several questions should be answered in advance: Is it an advanced language tool or it has already been outdated? How much value can we obtain from the language? Does it promote or block the cultural development?
deploy limited resouces to fight a losing battle
ISSUE13
许多世界上鲜为人知的语言由于越来越少的人使用而逐渐消失。使用这些语言的国家应该采取措施防止这些语言绝迹。
1 世界上的少数语言正在消亡。由于全球化加剧，由于各国统一语言，一些少数民族的语言甚至方言正在消失。比如美国的印第安语，澳洲土著的语言。
2 任何地区的方言是这个地区的重要的文化遗产，对研究地区的历史文化有着重要的意义，因此国家应该采取措施保护。比如说：非洲部落的中口头流传的民间故事可以帮助考古学家寻找失落的古文明。
3 同时作为这些语言的拥有者，也应当自觉主动地从个人做起保护和继承其语言。
.界上鲜为人知的语言的确是在遭受灭顶之灾。在国际上，随着全球化的发展，很多殖民地国家开始放弃自己的土语aboriginal ，转而学习英语或者法语;另一方面，语言是交流的工具，如果原来的语言不再被广泛适用，慢慢便会消失
但是国际化的潮流不可抵挡，实现国家科学，文化各个方面的的进步需要国家间合作，国际间的紧密合作首先要克服的就是语言障碍。如果语言不通，它不仅阻碍了国际经济贸易，同时也阻碍的地区经济的发展。误解有时候会导致冲突。一些原始的语言被代替也是自然选择的结果。
语言是一个民族的象征，也是一个民族文化最基本的元素，政府应该保护民族的语言，这样有利于保护民族文化，人类财富wealth。 任何地区的方言是这个地区的重要的文化遗产，对研究地区的历史文化有着重要的意义，因此国家应该采取措施保护。比如说：非洲部落的中口头流传的民间故事可以帮助考古学家寻找失落的古文明。国家应该在这些地区开设和本地语言有关的课程，鼓励人们学自己的语言，同时也应该出版一些这些语言的出版物，如图书，报纸，广播等。比如在中国，为了保护藏 Tibet 文化，政府在当地开设了藏语文化科课，而且有很多藏语出版物，这样就有助于保护这门语言。
【题目】“Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.”
【翻译】许多世界上鲜为人知的语言由于越来越少的人使用而逐渐消失。使用这些语言的国家应该采取措施防止这些语言绝迹。
【提纲】Position:agree
Some countries should take actions to prevent there languages that are facing extinct from dying out.So does the people themselves who own the languages.
1、世界上鲜为人知的语言的确是在遭受灭顶之灾。
1〉在国际上，随着全球化的发展，很多殖民地国家开始放弃自己的土语，转而学习英语或者法语;也是国际化的要求不可否认，国际间的紧密合作首先要克服的就是语言障碍。如果语言不通，它不仅阻碍了国际经济贸易，甚至有时也导致了误解和武装冲突的升级。
2〉在国内，少数民族和汉族的通婚导致了少数民族的同化，包括语言在内的一些风俗习惯也在逐渐消失;
2、任何地区的方言是这个地区的重要的文化遗产，对研究地区的历史文化有着重要的意义，因此国家应该采取措施保护。比如说：非洲部落的中口头流传的民间故事可以帮助考古学家寻找失落的古文明。
3、同时作为这些语言的拥有者，也应当自觉主动地从个人做起保护和继承其语言。
4、结论
.语种消失
一、语言的重要性，小语种被全球化 encroach，应该保留;但全球化的语言 prevalence 又很必要 international communication ，因此政府只需支持少数 scientists 去研究，尤其在资源有限时，不用可以追求数量
二、语言是 carrier，其本身也是宝藏 not only are languages carriers of human history, but also they themselves are treasures of human beings.
1.失去语言就失去了通往一个祖先努力、长期建立的文明的 access
2.历史资料(history, archeology) 必须语言解读, 除非找到 hints Rosetta Stone
3.evidence of human's intelligence， differing from other species, 应该被value
三、同化使多样性消失 assimilation that jeopardizes the diversity of languages and cultures emerges with colonialism in the past or with globalization at present.
1.以前是殖民地时期，被逼，Daudet, the last lesson, Prussia
2. 现在是全球化
四、但通用语言确实有好处 we do need a uniform language to communicate and to learn from the strong in the worldwide environment.
1.世界上最先进的技术、知识用英语表达，计算机 adopt English as its official language ，国际会议 stipulate English presentation, meeting paper
2. 如果不学习等于固步自封，tunnel vision ，尤其是小语种国家都比较穷
五、所以最好的办法是政府资助小部分科学家学习、研究 the best way for government, considering both the importance of language and the necessity of using an international language, is to protect lesser-known languages by supporting a fe w experts to learn and research them.
1.有限的资源，还有更 pressing的问题
2.日常不需要，不需要大规模的学，把重心从数量上转移到 the researching application ，比如某语言只有在研究非洲某部落的文明时才有用。
六、结论：practicality and limited reso urces, striking a balance
13T “Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.”
.许多世界上鲜为人知的语言由于越来越少的人使用而逐渐消失。使用这些语言的国家应该采取措施防止这些语言绝迹。
When retrospecting development of recent history, we may find many languages of the world are becoming extinct.
① 需要保护。正面说：代表了一个民族的文化和历史，能够从中吸取到一些精华。反面说：当一种语言消灭时，倚赖其的文化也会消亡。With the disappearing of native language, at the same time, native culture constructed on the language is perishing.
② 但语言的消亡是正常现象。就如在适者生存一样，当不适应社会发展时，就会自然被淘汰。如：许多原住民的 aboriginal 语言 随着全球化被英语取代
③ 政府所关注的不应该是由多少人使用这个语言。有价值的语言应该由政府拨款给学者或博物馆进行研究保存。
With the development of globalization, increasing cooperation within countries brings each country both prosperities especially in science and technology, and impact on culture.
高分GRE写作提纲举例指导
14“It is necessary for everyone to read poetry, novels, mythology and other types of
imaginative literature.”
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1、幻想类作品能够激发人的想象力和创造力;如登上月球、克隆啊等起初源都于科幻;
2、幻想类作品能够丰富人的精神世界，带给人精神力量 invigorate，很好的休息;
3、但是，人不应当只沉溺于这些作品，还应当读科学、历史等理性的书籍;
14 T “It is necessary for everyone to read poetry, novels, mythology and ot her types of imaginative literature.” 14. 每个人都有必要去阅读诗、小说、神话和其他的幻想类的文学作品。
① 许多想象的作品成为文化的基础，并一直流传至今，对人类文明有着深远的影响：神化和传说。古希腊罗马神话，充满想象，对以此为基础并且同样灿烂悠久的西方文明有着深远影响。Ancient Greek and Roman myths, are full of imagination, and become the foundation of the western culture which is also gorgeous and old-line. Furthermore, we can find the influences of these myths from today’s literature、sculpture 、painting、music、and architecture.甚至在 的奥运会上
②想象的作品展示给人更美好、更纯洁 unsophisticated 的社会。安徒生童话 Andersen is famous for his fairy tales, Ugly Duckling, 蕴含在其中的同情心 sympathy that it implied the ugly duckling 、对于世界的爱 the love for the world the little mermaid、对诚实、勇敢的美德的歌颂 Emperor’s New Suit.
③Only imaginative works can provide meaning to historical events—through the use of devices 设备、策略 such as symbolism 象征主义 and metaphor 隐喻、暗喻。但丁 Dante 神曲Divine comedy/Divina Commedia, one of the landmarks of world literature. 宣扬了个性解放的思想。基教精神的最崇高体现，将善与恶视为两极，互不相容。人要靠信仰而活着。神曲本身是一个隐喻，从黑暗的森林，到地狱hell 、净界 limbo/炼狱purgatory 、天堂的过程，代表由懵懂 ignorant、挣扎 struggle、渴望thirst for 到救赎 salvation 的历程course。但丁希望引导读者反省人性的罪恶 meditate the evils of human，思索当时混乱的局势 ponder the chaotic situation at that time ，并试着提出解决之道 bring forward a solution，使人达到幸福之地 blessed place。更深的揭露社会现象
④not everyone. A time is limited, 可以做更有用的事 B 有的人没有条件。如：战区 war zone的人民/ 非洲的挨饿的儿童 hungry African children
We have been brought up with fairy tales, mythologies and science fictions.Imaginative literature is characterized by fancy and illusion, which can inspire our imagination as well as intelligence. However, when we immerse in the fantasy contrived by imaginative work, we should also notice its dark side.
篇3：gre考试写作建议你需要了解
gre考试写作建议你需要了解
gre写作建议介绍
首先，给出了gre写作考试题库。经过前辈几年的总结，计算机考试本身已经没有悬念。高频、模版、示例、范文、大量资料充斥着互联网，并被专业人士和机构汇总印刷。考生考试前只需花两三个月的时间练习，申请的分数一点都不成问题。对一个有良好基础的人来说，一两个月就足够了。但问题也随之而来。每个人都使用相同的参考资料，写作水平也一样。看来考官分不清好坏，只能给出最安全的分数。
其次，由于即兴创作的倾向，虽然语言逐渐向标准的书面英语靠拢，但仍缺乏时间的沉淀，无法一步到位地达到GRE写作本身的特点。就像形状但不是精神。
最后，可以说，大部分作品还处于临摹阶段，而不是独立创作阶段。因为有现成的模板和例子，在范文的指导下，gre写作方法,gre写作怎么练模仿写作的结构和观点。所以它经常导致一篇作文看起来像那样，但事实上，它没有意义。对题目的意义和作文的目的缺乏透彻的理解。
综上所述，有几个原因导致大多数考前付出了无数汗水和努力的考生最终未能达到这个邪恶的理想分数。为了解决这个问题，这里有一些建议，
gre考试词汇。很多人在写作前都在问是否需要背诵红皮书上的单词。答案是否定的，《红宝书》中的单词是为笔试的中文部分而收集整理的，与作文没有多大关系。作文的高级水平还是那些。当机器或考官看到它时，他或她会立即把它锁上。如果他或她知道如何写议论文，他或她将依赖他们。此外，一些常用动词和名词的同义词应分成若干组记忆。英语修辞不是华丽的，而是多变的。句型应该是可变的，表达相同意思的词也应该是可变的。原来英语单调，重复是禁忌。
GRE模板。如何使用模板不是使用模板，而是合理使用模板。因为对初学者来说，一目了然是件好事。什么是结构?模板是结构。模板是骨架，支撑，但不是灵魂。当然，灵魂部分是文章的主要目的，靠自己不懈的写作，不断的研究去探索和发现。不要依赖模板。没有灵魂的骷髅得不到高分。
练习。实践必须从头到尾进行。从量变到质变的突破还需要时间。
在考试中。考前的模型测试是为了让大家抓紧时间，更好地进一步检查缺失，弥补缺失。在考场里，面对危险，我们不应感到困惑。不管出现什么样的问题，我们相信我们以前见过他们，没有他们的家人，我们无法改变。当然，我们在实践中需要不断提高自己的知识基础。
GRE写作低分文章中有什么常见的逻辑问题
一、逻辑问题：
大体上来说，同学们的逻辑问题是最多的。逻辑问题有三种，通篇逻辑，段落之间，段落之中。
其实这可能和我们高中初中的英语教育有关系，大家都很喜欢一条一条摆原因。Firstly， secondly...然后后面至于这个ly后面是什么就不管了，一顿胡扯。也不管这段落与段落之间的衔接是否自然，反正都有什么ly给打头阵。
事实上，中西方的思维总是存在差异，很多时候看管老师们都不懂考生在说什么。考官很困惑，这个例子和这个有关系吗?为什么前面在说A，后面突然B了?
二、整体观念：
和结论什么关系?要记住一点，GRE作文文章是一个整体，你的开篇结尾和中部内容都是应该有关联的。也就是说，在开头提到的，文中应该有展开，同时在结尾有总结。中文里不也要求行文流畅么，这至少得要求逻辑是通顺的。
三、能力要求：
很多同学都很喜欢写中立观点“A不错，但不够好”，这虽然看起来很客观，但实际上这种GRE作文对逻辑的要求非常高，要怎样去组织语言，组织相应的论据论点，非常考验人。
有同学想说A事件要瑕疵互见，但是写着写着就乱七八糟，东一块西一块，不知道在讲点什么了。更有厉害的索性冗长的来词，讲了个空话。所以建议刚上手的同学，还是选择一边倒，站定脚跟不放松。即便是真的要写中立观点，实际上也都在A和B之间有所偏好。
四、内容空洞：
此外，现在很多人会要求练writing的时候先写提纲。于是同学们们就只写一个观点，然后后面的例子乱用，或者根本没有弄清楚什么是例子。事实上，这种展开，可以是实例，也可以是虚拟的假设。实例中往往分自己的经验和他人的经验。那么怎样的例子有说服力呢?
一般来说是：名人名事(知名度大)>众人众事(样本大)>自己经历(体会深)>他人经历。假设往往不够有说服力，因为很难涉及到每一个变量。但是假设在有的时候可以行得通，就是在很难说清楚步骤和因果关系的时候，用一个假设场景来推导会让文章变得浅显易懂。
所以建议，在刚开始上手写GRE作文的时候，先不要给自己30分钟的压力，先列出提纲(10分钟)，再用30分钟去写，看能写多少。
五、GRE写作选材准确：
记住你的举例一定要死死扣住你的GRE作文观点，不要是和观点打擦边球的。
例子一定要从论点出发，再回到论点。不要将你的论点发散，后果很可能就是越写越跑题。所以每次写好一篇文章，都看看，论据里的key words是不是和论点里的key words一样，论点里的key words又是不是和题目里的key words一样。你的key words 可以比大题里的key words更加narrow，但是千万不要更加广泛。
不要沉迷于GRE高频作文不能自拔
为实现自己的留学之梦，无数学生默默地在GRE考试中付出自己辛勤的汗水。所有GRE高分故事背后都有值得我们学习的GRE备考经验。相信这样的一个个GRE高分故事能够在你备考GRE考试的过程中送上一丝鼓励与指导。
每天总会有很多人问我关于“GRE高频作文题”的问题，其中包括“高频”该如何使用，“高频”的题号和官方的题号对不上怎么办诸如此类的问题。在此，我就GRE作文高频试题的问题，也来谈谈我的看法。
很多同学在备考GRE作文的时候，之所以对“高频”情有独钟，实际上思想根源还是希望能减少工作量，说得通俗一点，也就是还是抱有“投机取巧”的心理。这些同学的想法往往是：GRE官方的题库给出的200多道题太多了，看高频可以减低我的工作量(也就是不需要把200多道题目都看完)，如果在考试的时候遇到高频题目，而我正好写过的话，那么分数就是有保证的。或者，至少比写一篇完全没有看过的文章要强。如果我们把这些同学的看法当做一个论证的过程来找找其中的逻辑问题的话，大家就能明白为什么我说“高频只是个传说了”。
在这个论证过程中，同学首先假设了一个前提，就是“写一篇已经写过的文章得到高分的可能性大于写一篇没有写过的文章”。可是，我们考虑一下，如果本身这篇文章从一开始按照这个同学的分析思路，包括写作的语言就存在巨大问题的话，那么，即使是考试的时候照着抄一遍，分数也仍然会是很低的。因此，只有当你的写作思路正确，分析过程正确，语言表达正确这几个条件都满足的时候，对于题目的熟练程度，或者是否写过某个题目的作文，才会影响到最后的分数。当然，我们还同时忽略了考场上的临场状态的变化问题。而反之，如果一个考生有正确的分析思路和写作思路，有比较好的语言表达能力，那其实考试的时候是否写过某个题目就变得不重要了，因为最终他的能力会很好地解决题目熟悉程度的问题。比如我们所熟悉的高考语文中进行的作文测试，我们实际上是完全不知道考试会出现什么题目的，我们平时练习的时候，也基本上不会考虑考试的时候是否会遇到同样的题目，但是最终，写作能力比较好，思维方式比较正确，知识面比较宽的同学往往会在作文中得到高分。从这个角度来看，实际上在准备作文的过程中，练习的题目是否是高频并不重要，而重要的是，是否通过练习形成了正确的分析思路，写作思路，并且让语言的表达正确。
其次，很多人也认为“高频”题目在考试时被抽到的可能性更大，并且还有人会计算题目出现的概率。为了让大家都能看明白，我不会在这里建立一个模型来计算什么题目出现的概率较大，我们只考虑如下的一些问题。首先，ETS在从开放题库中抽取题目给考生的时候，是一种随机的选择方式，那么，每个题目被抽取到的概率是完全一样的。而现在并没有证据表明ETS在抽取题目的时候采用了任何优先级策略，所以我们不能对此作出主观假设。第二，从目前的高频统计方式来看，存在着很大的漏洞。据我所了解的情况，基本上是部分考生在考试结束后，在一些论坛或者BBS上发帖子，来说自己考到了什么题目，然后由一些热心的网友来进行人工统计，最后得到了所谓的“高频”题目。
大家不妨计算一下每天有多少人去参加GRE的作文考试，一年下来又有多少人参加作文考试，其中在网上发布题目的人的比例有多少，而发布出来的题目被统计的又有多少。如果这些数据本身都没有确切值的话，那么统计的样本首先就是存在问题的。而“高频”的出现，很可能是“马太效应”的结果，即在很长一段时间里面，A题目被大多数人关注，于是成为了“高频”的一部分，于是，有人考到了这个题目，在网上发了帖子，那么这个题目的关注度继续上升。而那些“低频”的题目，即使有人发了，也没人去关注，但是很可能在一段时间后，某个“低频”的题目其实出现的频率很高了，但是却依然没有人去关注它。因此，要想得到科学的统计，必须有一个平台，来随时完整统计大多数人在考试中遇到的题目的情况，并且实时更新，才能得到较为准确的数据。
因此，在备考GRE作文的过程中，其实是否准备网络流传的“高频”题目并不重要，而重要的是，无论准备什么题目，都能有正确的思考路径和分析方法，并且能够用正确的语言来表达自己的想法。当系统化的思维方式和准确的语言表达习惯形成的时候，无论什么题目都没有问题。此外，如果希望消除题目熟练度的影响，大量阅读题目，并且写作提纲是必要的，其中也包括对题目的分析和简单的逻辑结构梳理。
GRE写作如何让自己的文章不落俗套
为实现自己的留学之梦，无数学生默默地在GRE考试中付出自己辛勤的汗水。所有GRE高分故事背后都有值得我们学习的GRE备考经验。相信这样的一个个GRE高分故事能够在你备考GRE考试的过程中送上一丝鼓励与指导。
想要提高自己的新GRE作文水平，避免与别人的GRE作文雷同，那么就要适当地背诵GRE作文模板、借鉴其写作手法，最重要的是自己平日里备考GRE考试中要多加练习。要想避免新GRE作文雷同，考生应从以下几个方面努力：
1.在观点上要具有洞察力，要有自己的原创特色。
观点是新GRE作文考试的核心内容，考察考生能否对一个issue进行深入分析与思考并最终提出一个有层次的观点。有了原创观点就不用担心雷同。我这样说也许有有点像让快饿死的人去吃肉粥。如果真的要借鉴范文观点，我建议应该尽可能做一些调整，以避免第二个雷区。或者干脆在文中讲明这个思路是借鉴了哪一本参考书的。美国人对真小人比对伪君子要宽容。
2.绝对不能照抄原文。
在语言上可以使用一些范文的句式，但是绝对不能照抄原文，而是要换掉一些关键词。或者如果要借用关键词，则必须使用别的句式。
3.在结构上可以采取声东击西的策略。
比如把北美范文用在120题的结构和破题策略用在210题上。
4.可以引用范文例证。
在例证方面，使用范文用过的例证没有问题，哪怕用那些被判雷同的例证也没问题。例证是人类的共同知识，谁都可以使用，关键是我们不能用和范文作者同样的思路和语言来诠释例证并展开类似的论证。
因此，越是耳熟能详的例证如牛顿与苹果树、爱迪生孵蛋，要写出原创的内容就越困难，雷同的危险就越大。
篇4：考研英语写作衔接词
一、文章及段落起始常用的过渡词语
to beginwith 首先
【例】To beginwith, smoking should be banned in public areas. 首先，在公共场
合应该禁烟。
first ofall 第一，首先
【例】First ofall, many people in remote areas still live in poverty. 第一，在偏远
地区许多人还生活在贫困中。
in thefirst place 首先
【例】In thefirst place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute. 首先，她
能每分钟阅读100 字。
generallyspeaking 总体上讲
【例】Generallyspeaking,the more you practice,the more skillfully you can write in English.总体上讲，练习地越多，你英文写作时就越熟练。
二、文章及段落结尾常用的过渡词语
therefore,thus 因此
【例】Thus,taking moming exercises regularly may reduce the chances of getting sick.因此，定期进行晨练可以减少生病的概率。
inconclusion 总之，最后
Inconclusion,universities should give larger amount of money to libraries.
最后，高校应该给图书馆大量拨款。
in brief,in a nutshell 简言之
【例】Inbrief,birth control is of vital importance in China 简言之，计划生育在对中国来说是十分重要的。
to sum up 总而言之
篇5：GRE考试写作作文
GRE考试写作作文
What society has thought to be its greatest social, political, and individual achievements have often resulted in the greatest discontent.
I strongly agree that great achievements often lead to great discontent. In fact, I would assert more specifically that great individual achievements can cause discontent for the individual achiever or for the society impacted by the achievement, or both. Nevertheless, it is important to acknowledge that whether a great achievement causes great discontent can depend on one s personal perspective, as well as the perspective of time.
With respect to individual achievements, great achievers are by nature ambitious people and therefore tend to be dissatisfied and discontent with their accomplishments-no matter how great. Great athletes are compelled to try to better their record-breaking performances; great artists and musicians typically claim that their greatest work will be their next one--a sign of personal discontent. And many child prot g s, especially those who achieve some measure of fame early in life, later suffer psychological discontent for having peaked so early. Perhaps the paradigmatic modern example of a great achiever s discontent was Einstein, whose theoretical breakthroughs in physics only raised new theoretical conundrums which Einstein himself recognized and spent the last twenty years of his life struggling unsuccessfully to solve.
篇6：GRE写作考试经典句
21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.
人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。
22. In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.
在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。
23. In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.
事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。
24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。
25. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。
26. The information I“ve collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.
从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。
27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.
现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。
28. This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.
这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。
29. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:
我同意后者，有如下理由：
30. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.
在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。
31. This view is now being questioned by more and more people.
这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。
32. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information I”ve collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.
尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用自行车的人数会减少，自行车可能会消亡，然而，这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。
33. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.
环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。
34. In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.
考虑到这些严重的状况，我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。
35. Using bicycle contributes greatly to people“s physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.
使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。
36. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.
尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，但是它也存在它的问题。
37. Bicycle can”t be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.
在速度和舒适度方面，自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的。
38. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.
通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。
39. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.
当前在高校和研究机构对教育存在着大量争论，其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。
40. This issue has caused wide public concern.
这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。
篇7：GRE写作考试经典句
81. Parents are firmly convinced that, to send their child to kindergartens or nursery schools will have an unfavorable influence on the growth of children.
父母们坚定地相信把孩子送到幼儿园对他们的成长不利。
82. However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts, who point out that it is unhealthy for children who always stay with their parents at home.
然而，这一想法正遭受越来越多的专家的质疑，他们指出，孩子总是呆在家里，和父母在一起，是不健康的。
83. Although parent would be able to devote much more time and energy to their children, it must be admitted that, parent has less experience and knowledge about how to educate and supervise children, when compared with professional teachers working in kindergartens or nursery schools.
尽管父母能在他们孩子身上投入更多时间和精力，但是必须承认，与工作在幼儿园的专职教师相比，他们在如何管理教育孩子方面缺乏知识和经验。
84. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents“ desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.
通过以上讨论，我们可以得出如下结论：尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的，但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。
85. Parents should be encouraged to send their children to nursery schools, which will bring about profound impacts on children and families, and even the society as a whole.
应该鼓励父母将他们的孩子送到幼儿园，这将对孩子，家庭，甚至整个社会产生深远的影响。
86. Many leaders of government always go into raptures at the mere mention of artistic and cultural projects. They are forever talking about the nice parks, the smart sculptures in central city and the art galleries with various valuable rarities. Nothing, they maintain, is more essential than such projects in the economic growth.
只要一提起艺术和文化项目，一些政府领导就会兴奋不已，他们滔滔不绝地说着美丽的公园，城市中心漂亮的雕塑，还有满是稀世珍宝的艺术展览馆。他们认为在经济发展中，没有什么比这些艺术项目更重要了。
87. But is it really the case? The information I”ve collected over last few years leads me to believe that artistic and cultural projects may be less useful than many governments think. In fact, basic infrastructure projects are playing extremely important role and should be given priority.
这是真的吗?这些年我收集的信息让我相信这些文化、艺术项目并没有许多政府想象的那么重要。事实上，基础设施建设非常重要，应该放在首位。
88. Those who are in favor of artistic and cultural projects advocate that cultural environment will attract more tourists, which will bring huge profits to local residents. Some people even equate the build of such projects with the improving of economic construction.
那些赞成建设文化艺术项目的人认为文化环境会吸引更多的游客，这将给当地居民带来巨大的利益。一些人甚至把建设文化艺术项目与发展经济建设等同起来。
89. Unfortunately, there is very few evidence that big companies are willing to invest a huge sums of money in a place without sufficient basic projects, such as supplies of electricity and water.
然而，很少有证据表明大公司愿意把巨额的资金投到一个连水电这些基础设施都不完善的地方去。
90. From what has been discussed above, it would be reasonable to believe that basic projects play far more important role than artistic and cultural projects in people“s life and economic growth.
通过以上讨论，我们有理由相信在人们的生活和经济发展方面，基础建设比艺术文化项目发挥更大的作用。
篇8：GRE写作考试经典句
61. Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.
成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识，使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。
62. According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family.
根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。
63. From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing.
通过以上讨论，我完全相信，随着现代社会的进步，幽闲的生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。
64. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years.
近些年，国际旅游的问题引起了广泛关注。
65. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.
许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。
66. But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.
但是这些人忽视了国际旅游可能会给当地环境和历史造成的灾难性的影响。
67. As for me, I”m firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited, for the following reasons:
就我而言，我坚定地认为国外旅游者的数量应得到限制，理由如下：
68. In addition, in order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.
另外，为了吸引旅游者，大量人工设施被修建，这对环境是不利的。
69. For lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.
由于缺乏独特的文化，一些地方不再吸引旅游者。因此，国外旅游者数量的快速增加可能最终会导致当地旅游业的衰败。
70. There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.
近些年，父母要求他们的孩子接受额外的教育呈增长的势头。
71. This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.
这一现象在全世界许多地方已引起了广泛关注。
72. Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.
许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。
73. In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.
首先，额外的学习对孩子们的身体发育是不利的。教育专家指出，孩子们在枯燥的教室里呆了一整天后，从事一些体育活动，而不是额外的学习，是非常重要的。
74. Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.
孩子们正处于身体快速发育时期，缺乏体育锻炼可能会对他们未来的生活造成严重的影响。
75. In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.
第二，从心理上讲，大部分孩子似乎对额外的学习没有什么好感。
76. It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing.
当别的孩子在玩耍的时候，很难想象一个学生能集中精力在课本上。
77. Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.
而且，由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流，很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病。
78. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn"t be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.
通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管额外学习的确有很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。因此，放学后强迫孩子额外学习是不明智的。
79. Any parents should place considerable emphasis on their children to keep the balance between play and study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
任何家长都应非常重视保持孩子在学习与玩耍的平衡，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。
80. There is a growing tendency for parent these days to stay at home to look after their children instead of returning to work earlier.
现在，父亲或母亲留在家里照顾他们的孩子而不愿过早返回工作岗位正成为增加的趋势。
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